My story has changed considerably over the four weeks I have been developing it. My initial title, The Burnished Letter, first gave way to Intergenerational Trauma , and then I settled on the current title Surfaces and Soundings . I've done quite a bit of re-writing and re-recording of my narrative, and I've also shifted image and sound media quite a bit. Even though my image and sound themes have stayed pretty much the same for the most part, I have added items and elements to my palettes. For example I added a sonar pinging sound to convey the 'soundings' theme. The changes in title were the result of honing in on the specifics of my dad's life-story, rather than telling a general sort of context-rich story involving the circumstances of his life. In recording the first draft of my narrative, I found that I had way too much text, and way too much of what I had was contextual in nature rather than personal to my dad's life story. The first hint that I wou...
In this post I divide my 'leave it all on the page' version of my story into three discreet scenes. Reformatting a story into scenes in this way is something the folks at StoryCenter recommend for digital storytellers, given that the output of a digital storytelling process is, at the end of the day, a film. Writing in scenes makes for a good next step in the direction of writing for film. Divvying up a story into scenes also makes good compositional sense in that doing so helps keep things organized and concise. This makes a story easier for an audience to follow, and kind of gently forces an author/director to be clear. The 'scenification' process also enables a more 'cinematic' mode of thinking to be enfolded into the process. Cinematic thinking involves blending all of the story elements (text, spoken text, image, sonic content, and moving images) together, in concert so to speak, within a series of coherent scenes that, taken together, add up in the end ...